Hazel’s Audition Patch Notes 6/7/18 Build

What was done:

Fixed Grammatical Errors

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Passage: story1

They lived in peace content with everything nature provided them but one day something changed.

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They lived in peace content, with everything nature provided them. But one day something changed.

Passage:story2

Suddenly having just nature was became poverty.

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Suddenly having just nature, became poverty.

Passage:illnessarc14

You’ve survived and no matter how painful that maybe you’re grateful for it.

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You’ve survived and no matter how painful that may be, you’re grateful for it.

Passage:I’m Transgender

The receptionist said pause.

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The receptionist paused and then said,

Passage: Home Alone

They are right, you are fairies crazy but that's okay.

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They are right, you fairies are crazy, but that's okay.

Passage:explain2

Will to consent to participate or not?”

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Will you consent to participate or not?”

Passage:explain4

Despite being having eternity you are wasting valuable employee time, will you participate or not?”

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Despite having eternity you are wasting valuable employee time, will you participate or not?”

Passage:illnessarc9

During one of your bouts of lucidity you learned that underneath the bandage swelling caused your face split to underneath the bandage.

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During one of your bouts of lucidity you learned that underneath the bandage swelling caused your face to split.

Passage:illnessarc12

You wound does not allow you to deny what happened to you.

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Your wound does not allow you to deny what happened to you.