Hazel’s Audition Patch Notes 6/7/18 Build


What was done:

Fixed Grammatical Errors

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Passage: story1

They lived in peace content with everything nature provided them but one day something changed.

Changed to:

They lived in peace content, with everything nature provided them. But one day something changed.

Passage:story2

Suddenly having just nature was became poverty.

Changed to:

Suddenly having just nature, became poverty.

Passage:illnessarc14

You’ve survived and no matter how painful that maybe you’re grateful for it.

Changed to:

You’ve survived and no matter how painful that may be, you’re grateful for it.

Passage:I’m Transgender

The receptionist said pause.

Changed to:

The receptionist paused and then said,

Passage: Home Alone

They are right, you are fairies crazy but that's okay.

Changed to:

They are right, you fairies are crazy, but that's okay.

Passage:explain2

Will to consent to participate or not?”

Changed to:

Will you consent to participate or not?”

Passage:explain4

Despite being having eternity you are wasting valuable employee time, will you participate or not?”

Changed to:

Despite having eternity you are wasting valuable employee time, will you participate or not?”

Passage:illnessarc9

During one of your bouts of lucidity you learned that underneath the bandage swelling caused your face split to underneath the bandage.

Changed to:

During one of your bouts of lucidity you learned that underneath the bandage swelling caused your face to split.

Passage:illnessarc12

You wound does not allow you to deny what happened to you.

Changed to:

Your wound does not allow you to deny what happened to you.

Files

Hazel's Audition 6-6 ver 4.html 6.4 MB
Jun 07, 2018
Hazel's Audition 6-6 ver 2.html 6.3 MB
Jun 07, 2018
Hazel's Audition 6-6.html 6.3 MB
Jun 07, 2018
Hazel's Audition 6-5.html 5.9 MB
Jun 05, 2018
Hazel's Audition 6-2.html 5.2 MB
Jun 03, 2018
Hazel's Audition 6-1.html 4.7 MB
Jun 02, 2018
Hazel's Audition 5-31.html 4.1 MB
Jun 01, 2018
Hazel's Audition 5-30.html 3.8 MB
May 30, 2018
Hazel's Audition 2-29.html 3.5 MB
May 30, 2018
Hazel's Audition 2-28.html 2.9 MB
May 29, 2018
Hazel's Audition Abuse Ver.html 1.9 MB
May 26, 2018
Hazel's Audition Beta.html 1.9 MB
May 26, 2018
Hazel's Audition Alpha.html 186 kB
May 21, 2018
hazel.html 4.6 MB
May 18, 2018

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